All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbor?'

so fucking hot, keep it up

everything was great

for a similar theme, check out "My Girlfriend's Rival" which is less physically intense but really gets into the psyche's of the characters well

I get the feeling that this story was too long given the lower number of comments on this than the other stories I have posted. Please, if you have an opinion leave a comment. It really helps me for my next set of stories. If you did not like this, why? What worked for you? Thanks for your time in advance - cffreak

REALLY hot, but the men should have had a fight too!!! GREAT story tho

This story is long winded. I get it wife a hates wife b. Husband b is a jerk and husband a is a wuss. None of these characters are likable in my opinion. The ending also was foreseeable.

Simply amazing. The build up. The subtle moments and glances. The little details. "thighs touching side by side." The irony. This story has struck me. Struck a chord inside of me I didn't even know existed. By far, the best story I have ever read on Lit. I could only hope you are in the isolation of writing up another story.

one of the best stories i've ever read!

Love sexual competition and humiliation themes. Yours is outstanding!

Hi,

I think some of my stories may fit the bill.

I give this one a 5.

really arousing, u wrote it amazing

and would quite probably destroy at least one marriage, the story was well written though too llong.

It should be a timely warning to some.

Denise deserved a fair chance too otherwise it is an excellent story with strong competitive female characters,it is hoped next time the encounter is more intense with both Joy and Denise coming on top of each other with Denise Wining.Keep it up please as it is one of the best Erotic Stories here on the forum

Your right not many people in this room is into female fights just poor losers.

This is exactly the kind of thing we need more of. The only thing that doesn't make sense is Daniel's arguing about sexual competition being a thing, but otherwise it's a great story with the right woman winning.

This is certainly one of the funniest stories on here. I was in hysterics reading it. The author has a great flair for comedy

I give 5 stars because I can only give 5. One of the best stories I read, it's really hard to find stories like this one, it really hit all my kinks.

I would love to read a ch2 about what happened after the end.

An altogether different kind of story that was quite attention holding. Good job!

I am 60 years old and have enjoyed catfight stories as long as I can remember, going on 50 years now. This is a fantastic story. The build-up an scenario are just wonderful. If I could afford it would love to produce a video of this story. I have written stories myself, but nothing comes close to this. Please contact me by e-mail at operator5284@yahoo.com. I would love to talk with you.

One of the best stories I've ever read!

I would like you to write the second part. Daniel and Denise divorce, Denise wants revenge. She breaks into Joy's house and attacks her......

I have many ideas about that...

Best story that I've seen here easy 5 stars is IF version possible?

AMAZING!!!! Dude you should share more story

This is the best story ,I have ever read about catfights.I really wish there was a part 2 and 3 .Part.2 where Daniel and Denise gets their revenge.Really liked the emotional aspects of the fight.The next part could have may be Joy cheating,may be Daniel could have trained to be better...Regardless this is indeed amazing.Keep up the good work