All Comments on 'Love Thy Neighbor'

by Wish4me

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You just never know!

Thank you for your interesting story...I guess I liked it because it could happen to any of us and chance meetings like that are always exciting. Loved your Cleaning Adventures too...I would love to put you to work for me:)

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MaryAnn678MaryAnn678over 16 years ago
A realistic story!

Finally a story that stays plausible! I could imagine its happening to me. Wish4me has the hang of it. I hope she doesn't degenerate into the instantly hard nipples and wet pussy syndrome. And they had sex the way virtually everybody would hae in that situation. But speaking of a wet pussy. She does have a way with erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good story but...

watch your tenses. Good reasonable sexual tension and real characters and thoughts, but the switching back and forth between past & present was really distracting.

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