by LittleBrain
Is there any way to get the original ending? The one Lit allowed is pretty tame. Perhaps you could post it on Stories on Line. Enjoying the story so far.
Even though Lit won't allow your preferred ending I'm still more than pleased how things went out and for the prospect of a safe & happy future for the main couple. Guess the next mission is that baby thing Luka was raving about last time :)
5*+++++
The truth is Zoltan is a murderer and has already shown a total lack of repentance, so any punishment he suffers will always be small. I understand that the author had another more "explicit" ending, but his comment leaves everything to the reader's imagination.
My question is: Does this story really end here?
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Just leave the real ending to our imagination I don't think you would be disappointed.
I recently read a story where a woman was tied up, ass-fucked to orgasm by , in her words "the biggest cock she had ever seen", had her ass filled with piss by her fucker, and her throat cut; sounds like a snuff film to me.
"This is not the way I wanted for Zoltan to get his comeuppance but unfortunately it did not pass at Literotica."
Well hell, now I'm super curious.