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- Love Unexpected Ch. 02
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All Comments on 'Love Unexpected Ch. 02'
by RomancebyFaye
- 22 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoAlright so I've read just about ever story on here and I really like this one. it's great and seems like you have put a lot of thought into it and not a lot of authors on here do the same. I hope you keep writting because your really good at it and this story is just so sweet. Although I do wish they were longer chapters; but if you keep putting up chapters every couple of day it should be okay! Anyways please keep writting and don't let any rude comments stop you!
Contest4Jenabout 13 years agoHaha this story continues to be hilarious, and, cute, and sugar and spice and all things nice. Cheers :D
feelinromanticabout 13 years agoThis story is so well balanced, cant wait to see whats next :)
alexandra36about 13 years agoawwwwww....so sweet!! :) I like that you're taking your time with the characters and it's so cool! It's really nice of Paul to have Derek meet the whole team and for the team to have accepted him....that's really neat. I found John to be funny...I'd love to have a friend like him. LOL. He's hilarious! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers! (:
SusukiRedd99about 13 years agothis is funny sweet and cute! continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amber1312about 13 years agostory in every way i love it. The fact that they are both as nervous as hell is really cute.
Cant wait for the next chapter dont keep us waiting too long please...
Anonymousabout 13 years agothis story...... I love how open these guys are and accepting Paul's parents were and how the team embraced him.... I can't wait to learn Derek's story, his parents seem wonderful also. EXCELLENT 1st story.
ushergalabout 13 years agoI didn't read the first chapter but I'm going to now, but plse add the next chapter soon
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI really can't wait to be able to read the rest of the story. Please don't keep us waiting too much longer:)
Anonymousover 12 years agoGod, I love your story! it's funny as hell.
John is definitely my type of friend!
wawferabout 10 years agoThat I believe is the most seductive words to say in a situation like that lol loved it! I am in love with this story, I cant wait to read more
