All Comments on 'Love vs. Hate'

The Love and Hatred part was really good! Good start!

... but you fucked up the html tag and one of your pages was almost all bold text. No biggie. Shows ya how much the staff here actually review a story for submission.

I so hope that the story leaves the two of them still so much in love that the outside world doesn't spoil what they have found. A very sweet and loving story that make my old heart feel good. Thanks for the good read.

I liked it

Now that's a real story with a believable plot. Can't wait for the sequel ! Thanks for reminding that feelings are important as well.

Great story! Showed the development of their feelings for each other up to a very hot sex scene. Can't wait for pt 2... I wonder if shes gonna take that pill? ;)

though some of the text was a little off, made me think that English isn't your first language, but still, better story than a large amount of stuff on here.

A great effort for your first story. Can't wait until L VS L is posted

boy, what a fucking hot story...

plz more of your delicious work PLZ !!!!

Really gud story can't wait for part 2 when are you planning on posting it

I loved this story it shows a more realistic life between a brother ans a sister.

Dude first thing first, thanks for the secret i never knew that ; ) also i got to say this is a great story i mean those two emotions are truly the ultimate emotions and WHEN IS THE NEXT ONE GOING TO BE INSTALLED.

Had me on edge the whole time, the part where Chris said that Kate wasn't his sister anymore, made me cry. That was so heartbreaking! I can't wait for part two, SERIOUSLY! You MUST let us know when you do! I'll definetly come back and read more, five out of five. Voted for you!

totally unrealistic there is no way in hell he would ever allow her to ride in his car he would have told his mom that he had no sister and left without her if he even went to the party in the first place and even after the accident he would not forgive her he sure wouldn't read her diary this belongs in the twilight zone keep it believable and realistic

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Great story, and I hope you continue it :)

Great story. Please write more. I thought it captured the intensity of brother and sister very well.

Continue!!! I'm waiting for the next chapter!!!

Best story I've read and will read.

I understand your point and I am also in the same situation with the genders reversed and a little less chance of a happy ending.

It's really mirroring my life and state of mind.

Really liked this story, great charactes and some true emotion thrown in there. I know it's been a while but that next chapter needs to be made. Please

When you do write it a seq dont break them up like so many authors do its the worst end to a great story you would ever have i read a story bout a shared bathroom between a bro and sis that slowly evolved into sex off a game the sister was playing and i cried thinking how much it was so real like and could feel how it coukd happen then the author went in a diff direction on the last chapter no reason given why or anything but had the sis married and prg by a old boyfriend dont ruin this one write from the heart a at least give us a good end let her marry her bro.....just a hope i have.

A great story line there, but i feel you need to relax and have a more normal approach instead of formal text conversation as applied to the characters.

Again,still a great start and a fabulous story!

Good entertainment ready for next chapter .Keep up the good work.

update soon...

what do u think u are a u fuck around and think ur sister saver her pussy for u. i realy dont know what are there writers. he keep the sister at the age of 20 and saying she is fucking hot .

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The plot and character development were good, but the word choice and syntax were so non-idiomatic that it was difficult to stay submerged in the story. I hope you can partner with a native English speaker to produce any subsequent stories you submit.

Loving this, but I have to say I think Chris is kind of an asshole. He's feeling guilty about reading her diary but brushes off slapping her? Kind of a weird family overall. Super interesting though, often the best characters are flawed or they wouldn't be believable.

Nice love Story. Please continue

Damn good story. Some minor grammer issues, but every book or story has those.

Something I need to know…What happened between Chris and Kate that would considered the beginning of his animosity toward her??