All Comments on 'LoveLocked: WokeWired'

by adamlily1972

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow.

I can't believe you wrote all that socjus college jargon without vomiting. I admire your mental fortitude.

pwnsumnubspwnsumnubsover 6 years ago

Awesome work! Really funny (the Dolezal-American bit about had me rolling on the floor), but as a fan of mind control and interracial, this was really hot too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Absolutely hilarious

Love your work, dude.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

You had me at 'got your quinoa, babe'. This deserves well above the current score. The trolls on here have no sense of humour.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Brilliant!

The tone and details are great. I like how the black guy is normal, instead of stereotyped.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Lol

I think there are some people who would totally do this!

beta_sissybeta_sissyalmost 3 years ago

I do not like the mention of each speaker's name before each sentence; it makes the story messy. That is not a criticism of the story itself.

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