All Comments on 'Lovely Auntie Ch. 02'

English is obviously this author's 2nd language. Most subtleties or nuances that might be contained in his primary tongue has been lost or omitted on translation. Yet for all that some interesting chords have been sounded in this tale's telling.

It seems the parents of the nephew are completely willing to let him sow some wild oats, with the long term goal of him finding a bride. The story could still go very bad but for now some potentially interesting characters are on the cusp of doing potentially interesting things.

I admire erosdon's brass for submitting this in a secondary language. Is he good

? That can't quite vouched for that, until I learn his native Indian dialect. That might take awhile.

I m impatiently waiting for the 3rd chapter!!Plse be quick!!Thks.91DF

Dear reader,

The 3rd part is already out. And the 4th is already submitted. Check it out and give your feedback. Thanks for reading.