All Comments on 'Lovely Dove 02'

Erotic rape at its best

Hannah has to be the stupidest person on the face of the earth (I'm aware that it is a story)! It doesn't occur to her to go to a hardware store and buy a bolt cutter or a hack saw to cut off the lock? Or wait for the batteries in the vibrator to run down? Maybe she wanted to get caught by him? Of course getting drunk and falling asleep on the train wasn't a very good move either.

Write your story as it unfolds in your thoughts. Don't be distracted by the analysts who haven't noticed that people act every day in ways that get them in trouble. Your instincts are right and your story is very good.

This is one of my favorite stories on literotica. Your writing is amazing!

He is a swine and she is a bit silly and it makes a good story! I love Hannah's internal struggle between what undoubtedly is a violation and her desire to give in to submissiveness. I wonder why he is so cold though....looking forward to the next chapter.

As a new contributor your writing is refreshing. The story line is thought out, could almost happen for real. Your grammar and spelling are very good. I look forward to more submissions from you.

I love this story! She must have wanted to be caught or she would have left a note explaining her plight with his address and phone number, in case she never returned

Loving this series. *warm smile* can't wait for the next installment! Keep up the great writing.

Very good, though I would have driven her to the edge more, a true slut deserves to be shown what she is

I have been waiting so long for the next chapter! Please upload it soon!

I am sure hannah can and will end up in some more compromisng positions.

Where is this guy such a hunk and definitely a predictor but so polite and is really taking such good care of her so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. Just the word training makes my little cunt throb with need

Pleeeeease write another chapter! I wish I could be taken like that! Wow!!! His talking and dominating nature alone got me off!

i, as a rule, don't comment on stories on here ... but you've convinced me to. i share a name with the protagonist, which is always nice, but this story is just so good in so many ways.