All Comments on 'Lovely Dove 04'

Gritty raw writing that shows the psychopath side of him a treat.

Fingers firmly crossed that she escapes in the end.

Your writing is very good and you make believable characters. For me personally, nonconsent/reluctance stories are only satisfying if they end with the perpetrator getting properly punished and humiliated, and the victim getting revenge, justice and not being broken. Whenever such a story would end with the girl giving in and willingly becoming a slave, I feel cheated and very disappointed for reading that story. So even though your story is really well written, I couldn't take the disappointment if she ends up a willing slave (to me the fact that she was taken unwillingly in the beginning negates any willingness later, the only redemption of such a start would be a total redefinition of who makes the rules, so she is the one who gets to tell the guy what to do and not to do, and he has to listen). I need to see the guy in jail and being made to be a slave himself, see how he likes it! So if you plan on making her a true slave, would you please let me know so I can stop reading this story and save myself some heartache? But I really hope that you'll allow her to prevail over his evilness and give us a very satisfying story! Please keep writing

I disagree with the previous comment but I really just want you to continue with this so I will gladly accept any ending. Just...keep on writing because you are so incredibly good at it!

Miles can be redeemed if you want him to be! I like that she hasn't just given up, but realizes who she needs to behave with to get what she wants. Please finish this & don't let her lose her spark of fight!

This was fucking scary. Scary good.

this is so good! please keep writing!

I absolutely loved this story and I check back on it every few weeks hoping that it's been updated. Please continue it!

I like her and dont want to see her broken.

for some reason i really like miles and where this is going. hope to see some more story soon and more character depth for hannah

This story is written beautifully. I really hope to see some new chapters to it and it would be sad to see it turn into a lost cause like The Rebellious Slave has as I think this story is just as good!

Please continue this story, its so good!

Please continue this story! Your writing is so so good, and the character development of Hannah and Miles is perfect. You said last December 2017 that you were still working on it, and I hope that's still true!!