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William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Lovely Ms Erryn........

is a lovely story.

Clearly worth a 5 star vote and a likely candidate for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why ...

... do you chop and change, even within a single paragraph, between "I" and "he" when referring to the same person?

And, regarding the 'Tags', there is no such word as 'consentual'!

It is 'consensual' - no 't'!

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