All Comments on 'Lover the Chase'

Your obviously are into the pain and humiliation thing.Frankly your stories are boring and its time for you to get over it or see a shrink.

I'd have to agree with the over-consistency of your story topics.

More importantly, there is nothing worse than the switching of names in a story. The characters are poorly introduced to begin with and then there's apparently a 3rd woman (Pauline, Susan, Sandy?) coming from nowhere. While I like good grammar, I can forgive the odd mistake, but not being able to use a simple search/replace in your word processor? Come on.

When he gets loose he divorces her right? Because that's the ONLY way to end this screwed up relationship. DUMP HER! And if she's not convinced, send her and the Ex to the hospital before you send them to jail.

That's where he sent them right? Since they had committed multiple criminal acts. That way he got everything in the divorce since she had a criminal record. Next time, finish the story.