All Comments on 'Lover's Moon'

Nice story. Would love to see more sparks fly between the characters.

Wish there was an edit button.... printed my comment and immediately saw that the 'i' wasn't there... :-). Also, I didn't have a proof-reader. Should have. After submitting, I saw ALLLLLLL of my mistakes!!!

I find dwarves are left out of most erotic fiction and wondered if I could make a good story using the son of a dwarf lord and an half-elven ranger female. This started as the Valentine Challenge, but I didn't get it submitted in time. Enjoy!

awesome story. more please!

Please continue I want to know if they will meet up again. Great story!