All Comments on 'Love's Eventide'

by robindavisfiction

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
sad tale

sad tale but we all will have to face it some day. only true love will help

through the passing. only the strong will not let the care and sometimes mean

things the sick say turn your love to hate. sad tale

Big BuddyBig Buddyabout 10 years ago
True Love!

A wonderful and sad story of true love. Thank you.

Sidney43Sidney43about 10 years ago

Every once in a while a story appears on these virtual pages that stands out among all others. Really well written.

SlirpuffSlirpuffabout 10 years ago
What can you say??

The story was lovely and so moving... it reminded me of mine...A Little Bit of Death.

A nice job is all that needs to be said.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
too close to home

Having a very sick wife, who is the love of my life, I have almost lost 6 times in the last 12 years, this story hits too close to home. Very good story and so close to home. Thank you

northlandernorthlanderabout 10 years ago
Sad

A sad story but a strangely uplifting description of something that will come to all of us in time. 5 well earned stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
real

Most of are here for the sexual stories, but it never hurts to remember that there is a real and true love. Exelently written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
ah...Real True Love

...is written about at last.

memorable_eventmemorable_eventabout 10 years ago
Beautiful

Great writing. Sounds like you have been there and are describing a real event in your life. Made many tears come to my eyes. Thank you for posting it.

smc331smc331about 10 years ago
Sad, but lovely

True love, true to life.

chytownchytownabout 10 years ago
Thank You*****

For sharing this heart warming story of love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Beautiful

Quite beautiful, very moving piece. Thank you for submitting this.

robindavisfictionrobindavisfictionabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Readers

I appreciate each of you taking the time to read my first submission, and I especially thank those who took the time to leave comments.

I decided not to name the characters to make it a little easier for each reader to add important personal texture and detail to this essentially universal experience. I hope everyone experiences love of the quality shared by these characters despite the heightened pain that such love can sometimes bring.

calgarycamperscalgarycampersabout 10 years ago
I was him

Wow, that hit home. This story is beautiful. I like your Style.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Beautiful...

Brought a tear to my eyes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!

This is amazing, and if you hadn't mentioned this was your first work I would have never known. Please keep writing and enthrall us with more beautiful stories.

Lamora_02Lamora_02about 10 years ago

Best story I've read in a while. This brought a tear to my eye and really touched my heart! I love your writing style and do hope you continue writing more of these types of stories. I just wish you gave us a little more info on her sickness. I know its not really that important what her illness is, but I'm curious all the same.

late2thepartylate2thepartyabout 10 years ago
Beautiful

Poignant. Moving. I cried. Beautifully written.

elisebeeelisebeeabout 10 years ago
lovely

my eyes are moist

LindaWLindaWabout 10 years ago
Beautifully written

Thank you is all I have to say

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
i was him also

not w/ my wife but my father..mom had called and ask me to spend the night..he passed @ 5 am i too could not watch as the hauled him to the mortuary...stlcris

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dammit!

I really hadn't planned on starting the day by crying.

Of course, I wouldn't have been crying if this hadn't been so well written. Her hero indeed. May we all find ourselves with such a hero(ine) in our lives when needed.

Well done, and a tearful 5 stars.

VisualPerv

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
emotional. I loved it.

Nice emotional story.

Loved it, though i was hooting for happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story

There's not much more to say other than "great story." I hope you write some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Beautiful story

Thank you for writing this moving tale of true love. I hope you'll consider writing more.

Crusader235Crusader235over 5 years ago
Difficult

Difficult to read when you've been married to your love for almost 50 years. Through the good times, and the bad. Our end is much closer than our beginning. Thank you for this one. Five Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It is a lovely story

I also have been married over 55 years and do not know how I could continue if my wife died before I do. She feels the same if I were to leave her.

I have now read your stories and echo the request of another that you coninue to contribute stories.

Thank you

PurplefizzPurplefizzabout 2 years ago

It is not fair that people of all ages die of this vile disease and yet virtually all research into treatment is funded by voluntary donations. Yes I’m looking at you Governments of the World and at the rich who care nothing about their fellow beings. You disgust me.

Utterly moving story btw, pretty much on point as well, after all, I’ve been where he is.

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