by zolia_lily
Maybe one of the HOTTEST pieces I have read in a very long time! I LOVE these characters and how this story is progressing. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to the next chapter! :)
I think this story is great so far and am really excited to read more about these characters:)
I'm pretty sure I've said this before but wow! That scene at the end was just hot! The simplicity of James's first time, the innocence and sexiness of it, of him experiencing something for the first time. I love the reversal of roles: Alex being the one hopelessly in love, yet also being the experienced aggressor. There's just something about this story that is inexplicably sexy and hot and yet pure and honest.