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All Comments on 'Loving Janice'

by beth2smith

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eodomeodomalmost 6 years ago
Interesting story line

It was an interesting story line since I happen to like older men with younger ladies. I would suggest you get an editor or at least a proof reader. Keep working at it 😎

auwingerauwingeralmost 6 years ago
Nice story!

I agree with eodom about the proof-reader. A few errant commas made me stop and think for a moment, but the story was compelling enough to overcome them. Good start, please keep writing!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Use of the word 'Fud'

Indicates written by a genuine Jock. Whether man or woman?

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