All Comments on 'Loving Lisa's Pussy Petals'

For some odd reason that's the first of your stories, not the last, that I've read. I really like your style & highly descriptive couplings.

this is the type of story i would write if i could write that is. Very well put together and just the right lenth.

Loved the story. Wish I had a sister.

Tender. Caring. Loving. Solid!

Thanks!

Great story! Thanks.

So the girl is devastated her horse has been injured. Yet she's happy to make out while it's in distress and agony? Please...

That's what lots and lots of guys ask themselves after they've fucked their cute little sister for the first time. A boy growing up with his kid sister gets a look at her adorable little coochie and finds himself hard in his pants. The girls notices her big brother's hard on and smiles mischievously, as she gets wet between her legs. Look, they're brother and sister, they love each other to pieces. The first cunt the boy ever sees is his sis's cute little cunt. The first cock the girl ever sees is her big bro's meaty cock hanging over his balls. They get really excited by what each one's got between their legs that's "different." Sooner or later they do what's inevitable. The boy sticks his big hard cock up his sister's sweet wet twat and blows his brotherly balls up inside her, as the girl cums like crazy. Then they do it over and over again.

Man this is epic, I can see myself in the room, truck where ever they fucked.. nicely done gave it a fiver

It just kept getting better ... so very intense, I got lost inside it!

So sexy, so sensual, and so fucking hot. Damn. I wish I had a hot sister to bury my cock in

This is one of the best taboo stories ever! One reason is the authentic voice of the west -- descriptions of four-wheeled backhoes, the cries of wild animals, the processes of dealing with rain and drought, dust and death. Well done, well done.

In my opinion, there is one flaw. More quoted dialogue, with Lisa speaking, would give the story additional depth. The story goes for long scenes with Lisa silent. Even if she said something nonconsequential in the truck, like, "I'm so sad. My heart is breaking. That poor horse!!!". we would hear her voice and feel her presence more closely in the narrative.

This was hilarious! What a satiric look at “cuntry life”!

It’s as if Zane Grey wrote porn - badly!

Well done! I couldn’t stop

Laughing at the amazingly trite westernisms.

You should write for a comedy show!