All Comments on 'Loving Made Easy'

I gave up half way through the first page. Too much waffle. I just wanted to scream "Get on with it!"

Thank you for your carefully considered opinion.

Its a pity Anonymous gave up she/he missed out on a great story.

Three toy draws now that could be seen by some unenlightened people as being a teeny weeny bit greedy ,not by me though , sounds like fun heeee heeee . Talk about being spoiled for choice.

That promised wife swapping ( not the straight couple one ) The interesting one with Dave , Kat , Lizzie and Heather . Yeah I want to know more , lots more .

One question though . Does anyone actually get any sleep in that part of Yorkshire ? Heeee heeee .Sounds exhausting ( in a good way ) . Ok ill admit I am jealous of all that hot and sexy action .

Thank you

Thank you for your kind words. The four-girl wife-swapping story will be told soon. And I guess you're right; as far as Hev and her friends are concerned sleep is a very rare commodity in these parts!

Great story as usual. I absolutely love Hev. Who wouldn't. I could read about her all day long. I am looking forward to the next weekend. Its got to be an exceptional few days (and nights). Can't wait.

SB

Thank you for reading and enjoying. The "wife" swapping weekend story will follow shortly.

I like the shift to the first person perspective. I think it will prove interesting to see how events are colored depending on who’s doing the telling. I love the whole Vic, Kat, Lizzie, Hev, Dave (I’m sureI’ve left someone out) story and how the characters are losely connected through knowing Heather Hunter. She’s a great character and its fun reading about her exploits. I wholeheartedly dissagree with anonymous, I don’t think its waffling, I think of it as character development and learning how Heather “speaks.” I can’t wait for the next chapter in the saga.

Thank you for your comments. I have intended telling a story from Hev's point of view for a while but struggled to get her "voice" until just recently. Ironically, I was trying to make her sound nervous to the extent of waffling a bit. Maybe I did that too well for some readers!

I'm currently writing a follow-up with Hev over her attack of nerves and ore than ready for the new weekend.

I am sure this is a good story, but I just read the first and last page

I'm not sure what to make of that but thank you for reading at least some of the story.

Another good one,don’t know what the others are complaining about.Looking forward to Liz,Kat,Dave and Hev going to be a hell of a weekend;)

Thank you for reading and enjoying. The follow up is about halfway done and I haven't even got to the big weekend yet! You're right though; it is going to be fun.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. I wish I was Lizzie. Beautiful girl loves girl situations. Thank you

Plenty more to say.

Heather: Firstly, well done in narrating your own story. It came over very well. Secondly I admire the way you don’t waste your time. When you see an opportunity, after a short time of careful thought, you seize it. Once you had made your mind up with Lizzie you phoned her and sure enough within a few hours you were with her for a night and weekend of deep passionate sex. And now you’re about to seize the opportunity with Dave.

And Lizzie: Like Heather I love your tattoos. They must look very good on you and enhance your already very sexy body, worthy of Heather’s kisses and nibbles.

D Ellerbeck