All Comments on 'Loving Tammy Ch. 01'

You, unlike alot of others, have done a great build on this story and made it enjoyable. Just don't understand why there was no page 2 or even 3 as it ended too quickly.

Kept it short since there wasn't as much bumb and grind. I wasn't sure how people would react. Thanks for reading!

I saw many English errors, which normally irritate me - as they did here - but I have to say I am enthralled, entranced, overcome with admiration for the imaginative description and compositional skills that blend what actually happens with what goes on in the character's mind. The way the girl's drawing 'comes to life', so to speak, is just brilliant, and I'm still breathless at the skill with which you achieved this. Well done. Freddy.

I like how used your muse to take you out of the present and yet kept the event moving along in the direction the character was going.

5🌟 's