All Comments on 'Loving the Alpha Ch. 03'

I hope this wasn't a quickie end. Those 4 are trouble makers. To openly challenge like that shows a level of disrespect that isn't likely to just go away. Even though Kat did hand them their asses. Any future problems will go behind the scenes.

I imagine Nate had a smirk after walking out of Jake's office. Knowing full well by scent that Kat was in there under the desk. LOL

This was a great story please don't have let that be a quick end there is much more value to this story that shouldn't go to waste

Apparently, we have come to the end,and though it is a HEA,it was unsatisfying. Here I why I feel this way--sorry,your protagonists are completely flat and unlikable. Kat is equal parts of arrogance and ignorance,and I can't decide which trait is more annoying. Jacob never fully develops as a character. The repetition of the same word with a 10 word stretch is unoriginal and irritating-somehow it interrupts the flow. I wish you the best,and thank you for your submissions,but I will bow out of voting,because at this point,in my eyes,it's a one star story.

Thank you for such a great read!

-g

Super sweet!!!! Love this story!

Aw, I enjoyed reading your story. Wish it waa longer but...thanks for sharing your creativity.