by Wicked-N-Erotic
Shit, Wick, that was ace!
First, the link between sex and love was deeply true: if it's lovemaking, rather than just (mutual) rape, then the emotions do become involved.
Second, the device of describing this through letters worked so well. It avoided the potential for crudity by having the blow-by-blow descriptions filtered through the protagonists' desire to recreate the sensuality of their experience.
Finally, him being single, while she was married (the other way round could have worked just as well) added another hint of spice. Everyone fits one of those models, so everyone can empathise - share the experience.
First class.
Eff
I'm not saying where my hands moved to reading that ... but WOW!!!
Hot stuff there sis!! That was hot... one of the first i've read from this category... if they're all that good, I'll be back for more lol
Well done to both of you!! ;-)