All Comments on 'Lowborn Ch. 07'

by Darkniciad

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Love the innkeep

It may be short, but the banter between Raven and the innkeep really had me giggling. Great as always. Can't wait for the next one!

cittrancittranalmost 11 years ago
The inkeep reminds me of one of a set of TV characters

Namely, the Tellarites in Star Trek: Enterprise -- they consider it a sport to argue, and it is considered extremely rude to be polite to them.

Tellarite, referring to the Enterprise: "Your ship is small, irritating, and it makes too much noise!"

Archer, referring to the Tellarite: "Funny. I can think of something else that fits that exact description."

TJ_RockTJ_Rockalmost 11 years ago

Really enjoying this series. Glad to see Mindblind's character in deeper development. Looking forward to the next chapter posting, but not the inevitable end of this installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Riveting

Darkniciad, your stories just keep me coming back for more! 5 stars out of 5

This was great, well written and keeps you wondering what's going to happen next. Its really cool being able to get to know Mindblinds

ausvirgoausvirgoover 3 years ago

You've definitely earned your virtual coin, although I only gave you 5 stars.

Loving the story.

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