by bracemaiden
Beautiful. Such civilised vocabulary in the midst of loving rudeness. Thank you for the enjoyable read.
really great story, twice as long as it needed to be, but other wish great..
Mmh. Long story with lots of creative plot ideas and well written scenes. Indeed a rare find. While enjoying to read about erotic Ds play the lisp due to tongue chip and daughter Louisa's curelty were a bit too much. Seemed more like a master not caring enough for his property than fun games to me. Other than that it was great fun.
Histoire, détaillé , fouillé ,26 pages , c super .bravo .
On peut peut être avoir une suite genre 5 ans après ?
Miss the good old days when we traded reviews at bdsmlibrary, which is a godawful mess now. I agree with hotbox. Love mutual submission, and you've always had a gift for dialogue. I am not crazy about pony stuff, but your writing is glorious
I love stories of eager consensual submission. This is a fabulous example of a happy relationship that is utterly perverted in a beautiful way. Thank you
I love stories of joyful submission and this is an excellent example. BTW... I know the author on Second Life. She's very hot there in case you could not guess.
Ms bracemaiden,
Reading your offering was great, altho now I am forced to work "extra" hours to regain some of the time I gave up to your musings. Overall the story struck a chord & I enjoyed the glimpse into the mindset of this submmissive.
You should get an editor to smooth out some of the clumsy parts.
A 5 star story!
Charmed
... you got me at 'ponygirl'.
You really got my kink, thank you [voted 5 stars].
"Sir Jeff's" dropped off a while ago -- he claimed that 'ponygirl' stuff was more readily available on the internet, and his efforts were 'superfluous', so he stopped providing.
This works. And you 'filled the bill' on his claim. Looking forward to more from you.