All Comments on 'Loyce'

This was a very good read, I hope there's more parts to come

It was really good hope they play it off the next morning and the next night she goes for the booty lol but seriously hope there is a part 2 and 3

Good enough that I am hoping for a part 2. Decent setup, sex is a little fast. Domination without humilitation is a very nice touch. Lets see where the big cock takes us next! Hope Loyce brings some girls to the party.

The build up was great but the 5th chapter was just bizarre and completely out of place. It made absolutely no sense whatsoever and completely destroyed the story. It makes me wonder if you got bored or impatient whilst writing this and decided to shove a sex scene in far too early without the appropriate build up?

I absolutely loved this story until it got to 4/5 chapters from the end. What happened? This story needs more chapters. If this was it you probably didn't need to write that much about sam and the other girl but if you are continuing with the story I'm looking forward to seeing how else you get them involved. I really hope we can get to read more of Loyce. From head to toe she is my kind of girl. Lucky, lucky Tim

P.s. You should have posted this in the TS section

Would love to read more of what happens next.

It's a shame you never continued this story.

Are you going to continue this now that you're back to writing? I'd like to see him have more "dreams" like this one.