All Comments on 'Luc and Sanaii: Scenes from a Life Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
ohhh...I like

where this is going. you had me worried with the last chapter, but I'm holding out hope for Luc and Sanaii. Don't make us wait too long for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
very well written, and it rings so true, too!

One can't help but sympathise with Luc, asshole though he is. There's a good man inside him, but I'm thinking he has a lot more maturing to do before this story ends well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great!!!

Please keep it up!!!! This is one of the best stories on this entire site!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
SO GOOD!

This was beyond good...just incredible. Your writing is creative, emotional and realistic. Just amazing how you're able to develop and descibe the scenes throughout the story...it's flawless.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Amazing

You draw your readers into your stories I mean DAMN you made me cry I loved it dont stop writing

ShadowAngel136ShadowAngel136about 14 years ago
Reading this chapter made me cry :'(

I was sad that Jay died, I mean u don't find men like that now a days, some one thats willing to take care of someone elses child and love them like there own!

Jujubee50Jujubee50over 13 years ago

Should known that would happen when you mentioned tragedy. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story!

An amazing and well written story. Really.

N.O.K

emj417emj417over 12 years ago
Oh my! and...

WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

why can't i give this story the 5 stars it deserves?!!!!!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
LOVE

I'm with you anonymous 3/15/13 what a story

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

I'm with the two under me I've hated not being able to rate this series

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