by huelust
where this is going. you had me worried with the last chapter, but I'm holding out hope for Luc and Sanaii. Don't make us wait too long for more!
One can't help but sympathise with Luc, asshole though he is. There's a good man inside him, but I'm thinking he has a lot more maturing to do before this story ends well.
Please keep it up!!!! This is one of the best stories on this entire site!!!!
This was beyond good...just incredible. Your writing is creative, emotional and realistic. Just amazing how you're able to develop and descibe the scenes throughout the story...it's flawless.
You draw your readers into your stories I mean DAMN you made me cry I loved it dont stop writing
I was sad that Jay died, I mean u don't find men like that now a days, some one thats willing to take care of someone elses child and love them like there own!