All Comments on 'Luca Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Nice. Like this chapter better. Before the boss came off as this sadist jerk but now he seems to care a little even if he is dominant. And Luca seems to be an equal player now. Looking forward to the next part

kurlanskykurlanskyover 6 years ago

Thus could d turn into a great story. Eager to see where you go with it

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

Really good story. I would like to see them continue. More please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
LOVE IT. This story is both VERY EROTIC & TOTALLY REALISTIC. I gave it a 5+ (5.25/5 = 105% "above expectations")!

This story of yours mirrors many of my erotic fantasies! It is totally my cup of tea... & then som! Thank you.

I have been bicurious since the onset of puberty.

I have never acted on my homoerotic inpulses but i became fully aware of them very early.

:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Luca1,2

Dam this story was good

Got me fucking hard

thanks so much

keep writing

HotForLitHotForLitalmost 4 years ago
Great story 👍👍

Loved the way you took it, keep it going, would love to read more

LunaJoyLunaJoy4 months ago

This is a really lovely written story. Wow and very erotic too.

Pleaseeee will it given a third part?

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