All Comments on 'Luckiest Guy I Know Ch. 02'

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This is one of my new favorite stories please continue the options and storylines could go on forever

Very hot stuff indeed. Please keep going

Please, Please, PLEASE Add some realism to this story. Everything is all laid out bare for the taking. The son has been getting played by both his mom and Viki for quite a long time, there is no way ANYONE would be happy about that. Not even a horned up teenager. I mean, his mom and Viki have been having an affair for months, even when she's with him. Then she sleeps with his stepmother, then coerces him to sleep with her, even though he told her no plenty of times. To make it all worse, the son seems to be in love with Viki(or lust) and his mom, knowing this, continues regardless. They're virtually doing the same thing his dad did to her. I know he'll eventually forgive them but please don't make it easy for them. There needs to be consequences for Viki's actions, regardless of intentions.

Good story, good writing...but I’m in the dark as to Vicki’s motive. If there’s a chapter 3 maybe you could include that.

Great story. Why does it have to stop at 2 chapters.

Amazing story. Please keep

It going.

I'm betting social media is to blame for the recent amount of porn and actual journalists beginning to not spell and using improper grammar when it comes to step family. There is no hyphen for stepmom/stepmother, stepson, stepdad/stepfather, stepsister, stepbrother. They are each one word. Have been since before Disney started having wicked stepmothers. Just spell it without the hyphen and see if spellcheck corrects you. There is also the film "Stepmom" starring Julia Roberts from 20 years ago. They aren't in-laws, which do require hyphens. Idiots of the world are taking over and influencing smart people, like this author. Up until maybe 2 years ago, almost every stepmom story on this website was spelled correctly. Now a strong majority get it wrong. Please adjust this for future stories and anyone, please take note.

Would love to see some more of this, and see how it plays out!

Loved it. I hope chapter three is cumming soon! I can't wait to see how this turns out!!

MORE , MORE , MORE ! ! !

I am hooked! I wonderful story. Must have more. It has a lot of twist and turns but I love it! I will be reading more of your stuff after reading this.

Check again!

Perhaps look in an English Dictionary.

The 'hyphen' IS an acceptable spelling!

The girlfriend was a cheater by her own logic "it's not cheating if you have permission" did she have permission from either the mom or Gab. for sleeping with the stepmother she may have had permission from the mom for sleeping with the son. The big issue I have is where vickie need to be bought to heel about the lies. Mom and vickie may have planed to have it develope into a threesome but even not giving names vickie could have said I'm bi-sexual and have a female lover but I'm not ready to introduce you to her yet, then it would have been a semi open and honest relationship as it stands she was lieing right from the start of the relationship.

Sorry no account but best I can do is leave a name Magefyre

Great story, erotically told. Looking for at least 2 more chapters including Vicki: A threesome with Mom, a threesome or foursome with step-mom. Superb writing!

I am totally loving the story - PLEASE continue!!

Although I don't 'know' this guy he certainly is the 'Luckiest Guy'. Awesome fun story. Please keep it going.

That was really HOT.

Specially the twist at the end.

I hope to read some more with

these characters.

Great story......just need to keep going with it.........

Please write more stories with these characters.

Keep these coming, a lot of potential here.

I can't wait for Gabe to find out about everything. The hot threesome with his mom and Viki. Would be perfect if he made both of them his personal sluts and Viki moved in permanently. Have Sandy move in after the prick dies and Gabe has all 3 of them at his beck and call.

Great story; so much potential here for several sizzling chapters for the Luckiest Guy and your luckiest readers.

She seems too munipulative I think the author should give some control to the son. Like rein in Viki and the other women.(also don't add any other guys that would suck).

Get sandy pregnant and a foursome with Vikki, Gabe and his mom. Dad wants another child as he is challanged by a junior at work. So begins the trial but he is no longer potent enough. So like a good son Gabe steps in and makes this happen. In this endeavour Vikki and his mom also support. And a foursome gets in the picture.

These were two great stories. Vicki is a riot - not controlling but directing. Gabe has really grown and the dialog reflects that. Definitely needs another chapter!

SOON PLEASE.

Looking forward to this story continuing great so far

I agree with these comments. Oh yeah!

This story is amazeballs!! You have to write more, love!!

Loved this story More please

More please

Chapters three and four at least!

Please finish this story!

I know it's been over 2 years but please do a part 3 to this. That last bit with Viki and Mom is so hot.

this story is very interesting, please finish it

I’ve just started reading your stories and they are absolutely amazing. I can’t wait to finish the list I love your incest stories keep writing you’re doing a great job.

Hot series, hot characters...I agree with

a previous comment: another chapter

with Vicky and his mother is needed.

I’ve just discovered your stories and

really appreciate your style. Thanks

for the reading pleasures.

Don't like Vikki, she is manipulating Gabriel so hard.

And his mom is not better, she's having a relationship with hif gf and keeps telling him how nice Vikki is.

It feels like Vikki is playing for some endgame where she controlls everything.

It is sad that there is no follow up on the story because it would've been interesting to see how the story unfolds.

Love all the characters. Keep this going. Gotta have more chapters. Although You should make dad even more of a dick.

The end of this chapter sets up another excellent chapter -- looking forward to it.

This story deserves another chapter or two!

God, I thought this story started out decently, but If straight from the beginning she was ducking his mom, that doesn’t make him a stud or anything, you just made him into a little bitch. God, what a way to ruin a story, I’m glad you haven’t updated in years.

Your imagination never ceases to amaze! Another absolute winner!

Amazing, now this is a story you should continue...Thank you

All I can say is... wow. This story is incredibly hot and sexy. It's unfortunate that you decided to end it here because you paint such a lovely, sexy picture that these two chapters aren't nearly enough.

No fiar not doing another chapter on this one with the way you left it lol.

I'm hanging for the next chapter.

Inconceivable and unrealistic, it started out great and like most the chronic masterbaters on here...you just hard to make a made up story worst. Show a lack of talent...

Where does it go from here? What happens when Vikki and mom tell her son?

Had real potential, but the mom is a pos, gf is a pos.

I hope the author make the next chapter in a way that the MC was hurt by GF & mom and they console and comfort him to like them again. If not it will be sad and disappointing to see he was alright getting lied/ hurt by 2 people who he cared about. And also make the MC look like a wimp/loser . This just my opinion.

Such a hot story. I would love for you to continue the story as to when Vickie, Mom and son get it on hot and heaven together. And even bringing Sandy into the mix to make it a hot sexy 4some

Great story! The level of deceit and manipulation from his mom and girlfriend is entirely off the charts. I so hope he was able to extract himself from such a toxic situation.

Don't stop now!! We need more chapters🤭🤭 5stars

Great story. I strongly incourage you to continue.

Your stories are fantastic. Why do you tend to leave us hanging and not continue them? This is just another example of that. Do you get bored writing them and want to move on to another story in your head? It's your prerogative to do so, but you have developed such great characters that they should see their way through to a conclusion. The few stories I've read have not had that completion. Thank you for what you do, but please don't leave us hanging!!!

Is he really the luckiest guy? That is a YES, NO answer from this guy....

🙊🙉🙈💨🤢🤮

This had the makings of a great story, but bating the reader to want more of his mom, the switching to the stepmom, that started to get hot until all the burrito bullshit (stupid dad isn’t sexy) - all to switch back to confirm we missed our time with mom and vicki. God effort but too much attention to bad dad - the least sexy character.

Next chapter?

Such a shame this series was abandoned unfinished.