All Comments on 'Lucky at Summer Ch. 04'

it started out great but somehow the swinging part just messed it up.

Better luck next time just dont add no more willing cuckold

I must agree that the swinging kind of messed it up somewhat... It being I live in the Great State of Wyoming... was this in the north Star Valley/south of Jackson area?? If it was Star Valley... that means it was among all them Mormans...

The first 3 were OK; started pretty good, but kept going downhill, but when I got to the 4th and the whip [OK, "switch"] came out I started skipping, then it was a black guy, then she wanted a rape, and finally it had to be anal...I quit there. I don't know if you got to homosexual, or showers, golden or brown, or what else, and I know there are readers that like those, but there are those who like necrophilia, also. I'm not letting my preferences affect your score, so I didn't give you a 1, but you managed to hit on 4 of my top dislikes and I wasn't through the first page. Write what people want, but let them know what you're doing. "Conclusion" isn't the term for "I'm going to be throwing in a bunch of other stuff now." PS Not hiding my name; I'm not registered.

Need to move more into the story pls

If you start something at least finish it fuck head.

Was fine in beginning but too many people then Amanda just didn't know where to go but was disappointed from ch3 onwards.

I really enjoyed your story, and I like your writing style.

I'll continue to look for more from you.

Sorry but the first part with Molly and the tape and the following scene with Mike destroyed any interest in Molly as a character and the trip to.se Connie was a big pile of don't give a fuck and you finished off the only character left Amanda by her getting fucked by every cowboy when mike wasn't around. Her admission of i enjoy you the most line was something only a whore would say. Mike was being fucked by tired old whores and the only person who he liked or liked him was getting fucked by every other guy in Wyoming. 1 star and waste of time. Felt sorry for mike

it was a very good series to read until it went downright bothering. what was wrong with them together

I think you left story uncompleted. Let mom's opinion be heard and Amanda and Mike's relationship blossom to become partners.