All Comments on 'Lucky Ch. 01'

Nice to see new work from you. Good start :).

the story line. nice twist at the end. the sex stuff seemed pretty generic but the plot more than made up for it. be interesting to see where this goes. lot of potential.

Wonderful start! I can't wait to see where this is going!

Awkward, lol. Hope I'm never in that situation. Great story though - I'll be looking out for the sequels. You'll probably finish this before I finish my twelve-parter. I wish I could write faster.

What's he doing with Naomi. Just because Liam and Tristan broke up is no reason to go back to her. He obviously didn't love her enough to begin with. What a tangled web....

Love it already! Can't wait for more!!!

How could you end it there?! The torture of waiting!

PS - I love your stories! You not only have good plots but you're a competent writer as well.

You have the beginnings of an incredible tale here- I can't imagine what twists and turns await us...please continue if possible! Thanks in advance!

oh please tell me that you are continuing this story line. i LOVE the beginnning please continue !!!!! i am begging

This story has a great start, please continue it.

This is an interesting and well-written story: please do continue it_ soon!!!

More please...great start..

are you ever going to finish this story?

Please continue this story.

Please continue your story!!! So far it's amazing, I would love to read the rest of it!!!!!!

Omg I have read this story so many times and I want it continued soo badly. You can't keep us waiting forever I know you read these comments so you need to write a sequel soon. This story is soo good and your readers want more of it. Don't stop here!!!!!!! I want them to find happiness together, Tristian is soo adorable and Liam better not hurt him any more or else I will hate him!

Omg you just have to write more!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!

and now I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You can't! You can't! You just can't! How dare you leave us on the presipice?!?!?! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease can we have more!

I really like this story, but it looks like your last post was 3 years ago. I am guessing that this is all we are going to get. Which makes me sad.

This was sure a good start to a story. Too bad you never finished it. I hate it when writers do this to us readers.

It was good and I wanted to keep reading but it wasn't finished