All Comments on 'Lucky Man Ch. 02'

Great chapter! Looking forward to more.

Five stars. This is going to be an amazing series, love the characters. Can't wait for more chapters.

They won't come out the other side better off, if at all.

Still a couple in love and just palying with each other...But thinking they are ready to give a step foward...Are they ready? Or will they face a serious problem that they aren't ready to face and solve? 3* for now

You know it's going to happen

I felt there was a lot of fat that could still used trimmed in this chapter. Five pages left me questioning the character progression. Slow may be the style for this series, but it's about as much fun as watching little league tee ball.

The wife-sharing aspect inherent to the 'Loving Wives' category is barely present. The extreme sheltered nature of these two is a bit off-putting as well. Hopefully one or both Kelly and Duncan shed some shyness

I see people complaining already and the story is still in the formative stages. As to the slow buildup complaint, we don't all have a 'premature' problem, if you will, and enjoy a more in depth tale. If they can't manage to get through more than a minute of story without reaching the climax, there are literally tens of thousands of stroker stories here. I myself will wait and give the story a chance before offering mindless drivel of criticism. Mind you, you have set the bar quite high with JTSOU. And while like many others I didn't care for the ending, that takes nothing away from 29 chapters of a fantastic tale. And that's what you are up against. Your own previous success. I can see the potential for swapping, group sex, lesbian, incest, a whole array. We just have to be patient (something many seem to have a problem with), and see if it meets JTSOU standards. I think it can. We will see.

I love the story so far but it's been about 3 months since chapter 2 was published. How long until chapter 3 comes out?

Is chapter 3 out there?

Ch 3 & 4???? When???

4*

If she's as shy as you say why is she pierced. Thats pretty radical

Inch my inch they seem to be getting closer to the precipice. Well thought out story. Characters feel real and everything flows smoothly. Very good so far.

Getting a little crazy for me, but I'll stick it out for another chapter.

Obviously you're well along in the series, but just wanted to reiterate: Don't cut future stories off due to length. If it takes an extra half- to full-page to get your descriptions and outcomes (!) the way YOU like it, then do it. Love your content, you're not cheating the reader by "generalities" when describing the characters' features....that plays a HUGE part.....

Thank you for your effort...now on to LM 03....

What a good follow up, nicely written ,great characters with plenty of well thought out sex.

@Anonymous Not everyone gets pierced to show off to others. I am at LEAST as shy as Kelly, and I have both nipples and my clit hood pierced, none of them done for anyone other than myself. I'm not going to say other people haven't appreciated them, but it's not as "radical" an idea as you seem to think it would be.

does apply.

Annoying that i have to read about certain scenes over and over again.