All Comments on 'Lucky with Kate'

Yes want a lot more.

Great start, but 10 years are missing in the story. I need more than the first and 520th week of their story. I am looking forward to more

Oh, yes please! You can start with the missing ten years and then go on - and on! This was a glorious start to a tale I'm sure will rapidly become a favourite with lots of us.

Thank you, five stars and please keep on writing - you have a talent for this.

Not just yes,but hell yes.

Great command of structure, this back and forth in time really sets the hot spots in a meaningful frame with a minimum of wordiness. Very nice job of writing.

yes

The answer is "HELL YES!!! More and more.

Sailor61

On the wrong computer

What an excellent story! A well told tale, with good characterizations and an interestingly different plot. Generally good grammar and spelling, but it could use a bit of careful editing to smooth it out a bit. Like the way the story flashes back to the beginning, then up to the present. Keep up the good work!

Well worth a follow on series

Ok, now that you have us all mouth watered and longing for the next edition....... Boy, that Kate is a "gem".... a man would be crazy not too want to have a submissive like her....

A super erotic storyline that has so much yet to give.

I would hope that the story is continued, and to tell all of the kinky sex that they were doing.

I was wondering when Charlie moved in with Kate, if he ever did, as it seemed as he wasn't living with her in this part of the story.

Well done,and hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read.

Looks like Charlie hit the 'Mother Lode' & Kate has him up to it!

Let's see some more; this has "series" written all over it!

Great story, well written that begs for enough sequels to make a fine series. Thoroughly enjoyable - now, where's the nearest Best Buy store?

Don't stop now, bring on more in the series!

After 7 years, if there was to be more, it would have been here by now. Not a bad story.

Well done. Great opening scene, and development. I liked the way you jumped from beginning till 10-years later and back again. A great addition to a good story. Don't see that method often. Very good short, sex scenes. with just enough detail to keep the pace moving along. Sequels, as suggested by others will be welcomed. Did I mention well written.

Do I want more? Well yeah!

More, More, More...

yes please continue