All Comments on 'Lucren Ch. 00'

Really liked this beginning. Wish it had been longer, but it was just enough to wet the appetite for the next chapter. Keep writing, please.

Thank you! I have a bunch written already, so I'll post every few days or so to give myself time to keep writing so I don't fall way behind to early.

You mean every day, right? Otherwise, we might have to open up the bag on you.

It looks like a good start and I look forward to seeing where the story goes. I prefer a bit of a longer chapter. It's so hard when you feel like it's getting started and it ends so quickly. Other than that it is well-written and I hope to see more soon

I wish it had been longer, too! Please post more! I'm really looking forward to seeing their interactions.