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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue.

Curious what will happen next and how exactly this society works for demons and half demons.

canndcanndover 13 years ago

I was happy to see the change in POV. It worked well with this. I would have liked to hear how Lucren became a slave. I hope it isn't just continued abuse and that their relationship develops somehow. What about his past makes it that he wouldn't give at all. He didn't try to give an inch in the beginning to see if the boy would be nice to him?

Look forward to more

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