All Comments on 'Lucy's Punishment'

I would have been grateful for a disclaimer that this is a story about actual hard core rape, of a virgin high school girl no less. I was waiting for it to go into a more playful non-consent direction like the majority of the stories in this category, but it seems to end with a sad, traumatized victim of sexual abuse. Obviously there is room for that type of fiction here as well, it just would have been nice to know up front, as seems customary with these stories, because a lot of readers, myself included, would rather not go into that territory. Thank you!

I will in the future, thank you anon for the feedback(unsure how to put in a disclaimer/edit but I will try)

You did a great job on this story, I'm looking forward to reading more like this from you!

Came alot with this and really liked the name calling and domination.

The person in the first comment is on the nose, I feel like you could have had the same hot action without as much of the dark stuff. However my comment isnt that you shouldnt write this story just that I wish I hadnt read it.

Must have a second chapter! She will ne pregnant with her teachers child! How that is dealt with is interesting.

Please write a second chapter! Love this piece of work!

Subtle as a herd of elves passing through the living room!