All Comments on 'Ludmilla's Muse'

Hi, I very much enjoyed your story but many paragraphs I had to reread as you appear to be writing in a very compact, detailed style, squeezing in as many details as possible in every line. Please slow down, you have a nice poetic style, good vocabulary but feels like your counting the words. This makes the story feel short and cramped. Pleased continue the story, Ludmilla sounds exciting.