All Comments on 'Luke and Amy Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
This Story Has it All. Dirty Teasing, Lust, and Love

This recent installment of Luke & Amy takes us to new heights of fun and dirty teasing and flirtation with a stranger, great sexual play between a brother and sister, and deeply moving and tender love making between these two siblings that not only lust after each other’s bodies, but love each other deeply. This isn’t a smut story, its erotic art at its best, beautifully crafted, superbly written, emotionally compelling, and emotionally satisfying. Miss Goody Two Shoes does not settle for second best writing. Her stories are layered with sumptuous detail that bring them to life, and carry the emotional pull of conflicted feelings and desires, bringing these characters to life. These are real people doing real things and they jump off the page into your own life. It’s a long chapter so if you don’t have the patience for long stories, don’t go there, but if you do, you will be rewarded with a fabulous story that is both a work of literary art, but also fun, playful, and very, very arousing. It’s a must read and I can hardly wait for the next installment to see what delights Luke and Amy engage in. Rogue

YamiBoyYamiBoyalmost 12 years ago
^__^

Another great chapter in this incest romance saga. Once again, thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Don't understand the fascination

I absolutely hate worthless sluts and much more boyfriends without a backbone handing them out. What's the point of having a girlfriend if she's seeing other guys?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Loving it as usual

Great chapter, GGTS! Loved the car BJ, the tease in the bar drove me nuts, and a scorching sex scene to finish.

To the person who doesn't get it: There's all types around lit. Read what you like and don't what you don't. Cuckolding and sharing is part of some people's fantasies and not others.

Scotchman1958Scotchman1958almost 12 years ago
EXCELLENT !

THE defininition of Literotica IS Luke and Amy, chapters 1 through 8

Thank you Miss Goody Goody Two Shoes !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Seduction on steroids

This Luke and Amy chapter stokes the fire and really heats things up. Amy is full of surprises and Luke doesn't let up on his love and lust for his sweet sister. More! More!

gwf0706gwf0706almost 12 years ago
Right to the heart

This continuing story goes right to the heart for me. I can't get enough of their love and passion for each other. Being fairly new to Literotica, this is so far my favorite set of stories. I do get a little fearful that Amy's teasing and the various directions that can take will become an obsession, and distract from Luke and Amy's love for each other. In other words, I fear Amy turning into a slut -- although I am okay with her becoming a slut for and with Luke. However, your writing is superb. Take the story where you want it to go.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Still Lovin It!

I usually hate long chapters on here, but after the firsy page of Chapter 1, I was hooked. I am always so excited to see the next Luke & Amy chapter. Keep up the great work!

Hot2Trot_NowHot2Trot_Nowalmost 12 years ago
Thank You!

Thank you so much for ch. 8, I had been checking back daily for my Luke and Amy fix, today was my lucky day! The love that Luke and Amy share is much deeper than just a love affair, and you have shown that time and time again. He is more than just in love with her and she him, they are also proud of each other. Luke loves showing Amy off and having her tease other guys because it is a form of foreplay for them. They both get off on it. It is a very common thing to do in committed relationships. He likes it because he loves knowing that these other men are lusting after what is "his" and she likes it because well, it feels good to be wanted. Plus Amy does it because she know that Luke likes it. It is always done in a safe way so that they both feel comfortable. It makes me wonder if those that have a hard time understanding these things have ever done something for a partner that was out their "element" but then after doing it found out they liked it...that is what has happened here for Amy.

Thank you again for this chapter. I will be checking back for my continued Luke and Amy fixes. I'm on-board until the end!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
amazing series

This series is spectacular! It has such raw detailed passion, very hot!!! Keep it up please

stlcardinalsinsstlcardinalsinsalmost 12 years ago
Perfect!

Perfect! Perfect! Perfect! This series is beyond anything I could have imagined. Every night I find myself hoping a new chapter has been written. Their love for each other is beyond beautiful. The sex is beautiful and sexy in a way that I can't even put into words. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Thank u so much I love reading this book please don't stop wrighting.I hope the next one is as good as this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Amazing

Your stories are amazing. The love Luke and Amy share is perfect. He will always be by her side and she his. No love beats this. Keep writing and keep increasing the love they have for each other. Btw, I loved the emotional part. Add onto it and develop it in your next chapters. Thank you.

2275jr2275jralmost 12 years ago
I am hoping this awesome story go on and on . it a real joy to read .

Reading chapter eight was yet another very just another horny part, each part . just go's on getting better and better. the writing of this story just go's to show the real talent as an out standing author you are . and like many other readers .i found the story incredible and very horny . love it please write more .

dogslobberdogslobberalmost 12 years ago
Can't Wait

When I saw another chapter of this story listed it was like Christmas morning. I can't wait for their trip together. You not only tell the story well you have made it so that there is nothing wrong about what they are doing. I find myself worried for them when Luke returns to Europe like they are a real couple I know. Three cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

This story is absolutely lovely ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wicked before the wedding

thanks so much for this story we all wish we all th elove that Luke and Amy share. cant wAIT UNTIL YOU POST A new chapter.. cant always check every daY ...but check whrn i can..Keep writting the stories are great. the teasing is fun we all wish we could let your inner slut out it would be fun,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
MORE PLEASE

Simply a great romance story with amazing sex for good measure

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! But please don't let it get stupid! So many times great stories like this one start getting stupid, and so far the only disappointment has been Ethan getting involved. This story it's about two siblings that live each other passionately and only want each other forever. I think it's pretty dumb to have anyone else interfere with that although I do think Amy's teasings are a perfect display of her seXiness without getting in the way of the two of them. Luke and Amy is my favorite story on this site by far and I'd hate to see it get stupid like many of the others... Thank you for posting this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more pleaseeee

I love this series please give us more!!!!!

tristahoontristahoonover 11 years ago

I love this story its my favorite story on here

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This is my favorite story. Great job with it.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 11 years ago
Naughty siblings

Even though they're naughty--okay, scandalous--it makes for a great story. GGTS, you've created a uniquely erotic story, and I've enjoyed every chapter of it. They can't get enough of each other, and I can't wait to read about their next racy adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing

I keep reading these stories and falling in love with the characters more and more each time. It can be a little cheesy at time but there's certain thing that you make the characters do that just seam real. These two love each other more than they could anyone else and in a way that no one would ever be okay with but they still have normal brother and sister moments. I keep finding myself reading more for the story than anything else and this is the first time I've done that on lit. I really hope you finish the series. Thank you for allowing us to read something as good as this.

AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

Goddamn their love is so deep and intense. Get rid of the sharing shit and it's literally perfect. God I hope she doesn't fuck anyone else. It would just ruin all that closeness and intimacy. The teasing and exhibitionism is fine as long as she doesn't go beyond visual and over-the-clothes light touching; beyond that is a step too far for an incest romance story.

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