All Comments on 'Luke's New Babysitter'

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silverwing919silverwing919over 11 years ago
more

More? I like what you've started but you could take it further.

-Silver

HellkiteHellkiteover 11 years ago
Yes more

Grate stater story I hope that there is more to come :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
May as well throw the Blonde's details away

Soon as Logan's dad hears what happens, Luke's a dead man.

ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
Boy, she's a determined girl

Doesn't look as if he stood much of a chance fending her off. A sequel would help, explaining how come he's a single dad and why she's so hot to trot with a guy who's probably 10 years older than she is.

jaqi1978jaqi1978over 11 years ago
More please

I liked the start, like to hear more.

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