All Comments on 'Lulls'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very nice beginning

I'm quite looking forward to the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
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"This was real life, not some comic book hero movie." ... Dude, I beg to differ: you've got a character named Azrael. // On another note, the jumping narrative perspective is a little weird.

pixir32178pixir32178almost 15 years ago
nice start

while this one has a really good start and i will definitly read the next installment. Any hope of you adding another installment or your rock-a-bye series? I love that one and really want to find out what happenes next :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Afraid to like it...

...afraid you might not finish it ;) *shurgs* I know, I know, shit happens.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
???

huh? huh? mooooooooooore dont leave me hanging :( loved this. your a great writer

atheistinokietownatheistinokietownover 14 years ago
I hate you...

AND i love you! Gah! This story-like all your others- is awesome, but I'm willing to bet you never give it another chapter... I want to know what happens and you're killing me here! PLEASE!!

JellyPieJellyPiealmost 14 years ago

This would have been a really amazing erotic story...if there was something erotic in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Hmm could do a sequel to this, its really quite good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Such a nice read can we have more plz!!

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