by emoboi
"This was real life, not some comic book hero movie." ... Dude, I beg to differ: you've got a character named Azrael. // On another note, the jumping narrative perspective is a little weird.
while this one has a really good start and i will definitly read the next installment. Any hope of you adding another installment or your rock-a-bye series? I love that one and really want to find out what happenes next :)
...afraid you might not finish it ;) *shurgs* I know, I know, shit happens.
huh? huh? mooooooooooore dont leave me hanging :( loved this. your a great writer
AND i love you! Gah! This story-like all your others- is awesome, but I'm willing to bet you never give it another chapter... I want to know what happens and you're killing me here! PLEASE!!
This would have been a really amazing erotic story...if there was something erotic in it.