All Comments on 'Luna vs. Rival Ch. 04'

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Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Longer

Either make them longer or don't wait so long to write new ones. Let's see where this goes.

transpuppet almost 5 years ago

I love how self aware Luna is. It makes this ten times hotter than if she didn't want it.

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