All Comments on 'Lunar Dance Ch. 05'

This has got to be one of the best damn story ive read!

Dont you dare ever stop writing! Ahhh soo good

Definately got me interested, im very intriged to where the story will take us. great writing - well done!

It looks like their romance may have been manipulated.

When Jozlyn sees the emblem on the pendant, she will likely think she's found a royal pet that's gone missing!

I have to say I am sort of tossed up on the story. The plot is nice and the dialogue can be pretty good but the spelling issues and some of the grammar make me wince. That is pretty bad since I speak two languages, bad and worse english... I would have to say find an editor if you keep writing. I will also say that it is interesting enough that I am going to keep reading.