All Comments on 'Lunch Break Fun'

by Master_and_Sex_Kitten

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
that was hot

awesome story, loved the part about the condom ripping and him cumming inside her

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayalmost 12 years ago
Good read

Liked the part where he had the balls to walk out on the boss lady for the girl he had real feelings for.

Very hot build up to them making love for the first time.

monolithic_brownmonolithic_brownalmost 12 years ago
Ah, sex AND feelings.

I really find it refreshing when there's little to know confusing feelings about the people you want to have sex with. I really enjoyed this being mostly about emotion than JUST the physical.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sequel!

Please write a sequel. This is one of the best on lit.!

Master_and_Sex_KittenMaster_and_Sex_Kittenalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Sequel?

Author here, can't tell you how much I appreciate the kind words :)

As for a sequel, well I didn't have one planned, but I suppose if there's an idea I could try...it won't quite be the same though, now the two mains are together...but maybe Jenny has a similar issue and questions her relationship...or I could give Sophie the new boss a spin off :P Any ideas are welcome.

Enjoy Literotica, have some fun ;)

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Young love!

A perfect story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
zori

I loved this!Sexy and original!

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