All Comments on 'Lunch Break Tryst'

This had something a lot of stories lack: sexual tension. A nice lead-in made for a real character. The object of affection wasn't all that fleshed out, but the pacing made if forgivable. Then a good build up got you ready and a nice (if short) action scene capped it well.

Likable characters, too. He's a nice guy just trying to score and she's a bit of a slut - but hey, that's what makes the world go round in erotica, right? With thoughts on dinner you set it up for a sequel and you could go anywhere with this kind of beginning.

Don't let Part Two languish. Let's see some good, clean, dirty fun.

I liked this story alot. It did have a great lead up and ended perfectly with your female lead still being in control!! I loved it!

Nothing like hot sex in the afternoon!!

~Honey

This story definitely deserves the H rating that it now holds..It is almost as HOT as the Man who wrote it.

Mmmm love lunch time fun..:)

public sex is so amazing.

;)