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by bettiezyx

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fantastic job!

Fantastic! Keep writing many such stories! And another applause for maintaining the story within a page! Beautifully written!!!! Fabulous plot. My all time favourite!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very good

I liked it

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#1: I'm on literotica for the naughty creative writing collaborative, NOT dating (virtual or otherwise). #2: Y'all demanded: the sequel to attempted-horror "Pregnant Ride!" is currently being written--ETA June 2024 Zyx is an alien trapped in human form. She was a revolutiona...