All Comments on 'Lunch with Mistress'

For a 1st. try at story writing I think you've done a nice job. I for one am looking forward to reading additional chapters to this story as it has series potential. Thanks for composing it in an erotic way.

Thanks: it's not my first story, but my first male sub story. I also hadn't done any mature stories yet, so we'll see what happens when he leaves and goes to see Agnes. I think I'll explore bringing in female subs as well. This whole male subordinate thing is all new to me, so I'm exploring as I write (having never experienced this in real life).

As stated in my bio, my writing is targeted at female readers, and my goal is to make them horny. Any feedback towards making that goal happen is appreciated.

Nice work. Looking forward to more. (5)

This is very well told and I hope he has more sessions with his Mistress and her friends,

This story had a surprising start with the old lady. It was unexpected, humorous and erotic all rolled into one! Liked it very much!

I would have cummed by now if it weren't for two things: one, ALL THE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!! All of them. They all need out. Two: I couldn't stop imagining my grandmother doing this stuff.