by Tombone
please please continue. i loved this story. you so need to do a whole lot more. cant wait for another post. please hurry.
This was a good start for the story. I did, however, see some minor error(s) along the way. You mixed up "Henry" and "Harold" quite often...And got a lil confused with the name "Jill" in the beginning. I'm a sucker for finding grammatical errors BUT, the story is good and I look forward to the next chapter(s).