All Comments on 'Lust Conquers Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wow

please please continue. i loved this story. you so need to do a whole lot more. cant wait for another post. please hurry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good read!

This was a good start for the story. I did, however, see some minor error(s) along the way. You mixed up "Henry" and "Harold" quite often...And got a lil confused with the name "Jill" in the beginning. I'm a sucker for finding grammatical errors BUT, the story is good and I look forward to the next chapter(s).

charmingdimplescharmingdimplesabout 15 years ago
Oh wow

OH my gosh

this is sooo hottt

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Awesome story, hope you come back and continue it.

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