by Choirboy37
Unbelievably rich and detailed descriptions of male lovemaking. You are an amazing writer. Please do more--especially one from a bottom's perspective.
Fantastic story...VERY hot and well written. You've got me dripping precum all over the damn place! Good work, indeed!
Issues with punctuation, particularly with apostrophes where they don't belong and with missing hyphens. You also have an uncomfortable mix of British and American English.
Pretty hot overall.
Please i need you to continue writing i really loved the story and the characters.
To the guy who complained about the story. This is an erotic story site not English Composition 101. Enjoy the story for what it is, a hot story. Don't be so critical.
What's next for these two? Interesting characters. Quite believable circumstances. Maybe another chapter from Jamie's POV? Is he or isn't he? Keep writing please and thanks for a very good story.
Absolutely amazing,I'm yearning for more,please continue the story.
My sexy roommate and I read the story above. I kicked off my flip flops, and my roommate Alex smiled as he unbuttoned my jeans and slid them down commando me body to my feet. We enjoyed each other in bed like Jamie and the Choirboy author. Many thanks!