All Comments on 'Lust-Making'

This story is hot from beginning to end. Don't you just love lust-making

Really hot story, especially for a first submission. Maybe a bit more realistic dialogue would be good, but that's pretty minor overall. Love the teasing, begging, and control elements. Would love to read more from you.

As to the anonymous dumbass commenter, why would you willfully read a lesbian sex story and then complain at the presence of lesbian sex? If you want to read impregnation stories, you can find them elsewhere without making a prat of yourself.

Good story with a sexy, believable power exchange.

Lovely.

Penetrating her cervix and touching the walls of her uterus. Holy mother of fuck, that sounds incredibly painful, that sounds like medieval torture. I once hit my cervix too hard and was in pain for 15 agonizing minutes. That being said, it is fiction I guess and with some suspension of disbelief the thought of being penetrated so deeply is extremely arousing. This is a nicely written piece, good job.