All Comments on 'Lust on the High Seas Day 01'

Sexpot! 5 stars. Can hardly wait for Ch. 2.

I really liked this first part, but I think being blackmailed into having sex is wrong, and also having non consent sex with someone is also wrong as well, but I know it is not in this chapter but in the future chapters, but hey this is just my opinion

Hi Jenorma - and thanks for your comments

I wasn't sure whether to include that, but some people like it (and I have to admit, the idea turns me on quite a bit - in fantasy only) so I'll reserve judgement and may go for something else.

If anyone else has any views on this, please let me know (could sway me one way or the other).

BTW: I have already submitted a correction to this 'episode' which I hope should be online in a couple of days (I'll probably end up amending the next two episodes too (which are waiting publication as I write this).

Great start. Personally, I love a good buildup. Stroke stories are so lame. If that's all one needs, then just look at the underwear section in the ads. I liked in your intro how you run a gamut of topics, including many of my favorites. Lesbian seduction, blackmail, reluctance. I noticed the two Asian girls were sisters, so between that and our heroine's mom, hopefully a bit of my all time favorite, lesbian incest seduction. And yes, different strokes for different folks, but just ignore Jenorma. I see him/her bitching all the time in comments. You clearly said blackmail may be a topic up front. If they didn't like that, they could have stopped reading. You have a very well writen, and very hot story developing. An unbeatable, and rare, combo. Please continue.

TimTam

Mellifluous Macey --- Just finished reading all your stories, and want to congratulate you! You are a talented writer, with even greater potential :). I have much more to say about your writing, but would like you to contact me at gavican2003@att.net so we can communicate more fully and freely. I'll be eagerly awaiting your rapid reply with bated breath (whatever the heck that is:) Yours until the sun goes blind and the stars grow cold (lol). Prof. Gav

Macey, you are super writer ❤

Sounds like much erotic times ahead for these exotic beauties. But I'm getting bad vibes from the stepdad.

i love cruise ships, but haven't been hit on like that, altho once in the spa...

I made a mistake and jumped right in at Day 6.

Big mistake. I didn't have a clue what was going on.

You seem like a skilled writer, and I cant wait to find out what happens if you get together with Georgia (sure hope so).

I love that you take the time to set up the story. Looking forward to reading more.

Great start

Macey is an extremely naughty girl, she deserves a mistress who spanks....a lot!

Write to me then - if you think you're the one to do it 😃 xx

Macey.