All Comments on 'Lust on the High Seas Day 03'

Loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Such wonderful descriptions (made me feel I was a voyeur, and not just a reader). Also loved the first-person voice of the narrator. Keep up the great work.

I really loved the way Macey pretended not to want to go all the way with the girls, and the way she dragged it out was great, she really knows how to play the cat and mouse game you really had us believing that Macey was there not knowing what was about to happen, but I REALLY loved was what Macey said before she left saying she understood what the 2 girls were saying in Spanish more or less I would have loved to see the 2 girls face when she said that the look of shock on there faces as if to say "Busted", can't wait for the next part, you are a very talented writer

Thank you so much for your comments :)

I simply love to write like this and it's such a thrill to receive praise for my work.

I'm also happy to be criticised as this can only help me to improve, so please keep the comments coming - positive or negative, they are all appreciated :)

I have a few more ideas 'in the melting pot' for this and other series' too, so I could be busy for a long time to come yet :)

Thanks again.

Macey.

Bravo little lovely one,

When came 4th part I wait with great hot eyes to read more...

The way you write and the details are amazing.

chapter in the series so far. Would love to be the one in the middle of those two senoritas!

i loved the erotic way you write. very interesting and even seduces the readers into wanting more.

You are a very, very saucy person with a gift for writing. Whether you are or you aren't a tiny eighteen year old girl, who is so attractive as to have had a wealth of sexual experience already (this is the internet after all), you most certainly have a very evocative way with words.

Keep the stories coming please: you fill my mind with delicious images.

M

Well, this was truly worth waiting for.

Expertly written, engrossing and sensual from the start, and the way you included the Spanish language was amazing. I thought at first it was made-up, but I checked a few phrases and they translated perfectly. You really went to town on this.

I thought it would be good, but this was far better than I had expected. So erotic, and the little twist at the end was brilliant. I would have loved to see their faces.

But even then you weren't finished. You set off to have more fun with their young Asian girlfriends. You make the series so addictive.

I really can't wait to get started on the next chapter.

Five Stars all the way from me!

I love this it is just what I go for. Slow and exciting. One question. They are English and from England so why is the money in dollars and not sterling?