All Comments on 'Lustful Summoning Ch. 04'

by mjm202036

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VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
So far so good

So far this is pretty good but could use more well defined characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
awesome

i like how julie is turning into a spawn/succubus thingy and i liked how you implied that with her eyes. And wow that was fast for the pimp to find them :o

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I don't wanna beg, but...

Like I said above, I don't wanna beg but you fucking have to keep writing. Continue the fucking story I wanna see the succubus suck the pimps soul out or something, like rip his god damn head off, sorry for my language but I'm just passionate about reading the next story ASAP! Hurry up and keep up the good work!!!

jkthekatjkthekatover 8 years ago
OOh! the pimp has arrived!

Can't wait for the next action! Will the pimp succumb to pleasure or pain?

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