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Click here"You called my name,"
"Yes I did,"
"I want to hear you say it again,"
"My Lord."
He briefly kissed on my lips,
"No, the other one."
I softly whispered,
"Vidor."
He looked at me warmly,
"Again."
I smiled at him and whispered on his lips,
"Vidor."
He kissed me slowly and deeply,
"I like it when you call my name."
I ran a finger on his cheek and along his nose. He closed his eyes and seemed to enjoy it. Encouraged, I ran my finger along his jaw line when he opened his eyes,
"Fencing huh?"
"Hmm?"
"I heard you have been teaching your guards fencing,"
"Oh that."
I chuckled and continued,
"Initially it was swording but I needed something more refreshing so fencing it was."
I gulped and braved myself,
"When you were away, I... I missed you."
He didn't say a word though his gaze was warm. He put his forehead against mine and whispered on my lips,
"The feeling was mutual."
I smiled at his brief response and I felt a hope began to grow within me. We might probably work this marriage out. I kissed him softly and stiffened a yawn,
"I'm sorry my Lord-"
"My name."
"I'm sorry Vidor, it's just the fencing took a lot of energy,"
"The fencing or this?"
I blushed at his teasing me,
"Both."
He nuzzled his nose on mine and whispered,
"Rest little one, I'm going to watch over you."
I smiled at him and planted a kiss on his chin before hiding my face in his chest. Soon I dozed off with his strong arms wrapped around me tightly. I had never felt this safe and content until today.
[More to come!]
What a wonderful build up, it has me loving the characters. Please update soon, as I am very much looking forward to it.
Do find an editor. You have talent as a story teller, but the errors in verb tense and subject verb agreement were somewhat jolting in what is essentially a well-written piece. Above all, keep writing as the more you write the better you will become! Thank you for sharing this with us.
Better than like several other demon / human stories I've read. I thought the wooing without talking was pretty romantic. Did not expect that (expect the unexpected).
I'm sorry, I didn't get past half a page, in serious need of editing, some really weirdly set up sentences, punctuation, grammar and changes in tenses just distracted me from the story.